This is an excellent paper. You really know how to organize an essay, and your writing style just flows. You set things up very well, showing a real grasp of what happened on 9/11. Your interview is very well constructed. My only (minor) complaint is that you didn't include more actual statistics about the economic impact (what airlines went out of business, for example).
I hope you are considering writing for The Patriot next year - you seem to be a natural.
This is an excellent paper. You really know how to organize an essay, and your writing style just flows. You set things up very well, showing a real grasp of what happened on 9/11. Your interview is very well constructed. My only (minor) complaint is that you didn't include more actual statistics about the economic impact (what airlines went out of business, for example).
ReplyDeleteI hope you are considering writing for The Patriot next year - you seem to be a natural.
99/100